Tuesday, April 20, 2010

PERSONAL NARRATIVES

MY PERSONAL NARRATIVE

My name is Robbie Yoo. This is my English name and my real name is Ho-sung Yoo. I’m from South Korea. In my personal narrative, there are so many things that are specific to me. In general, I’m a boy. I live in America and I was born in South Korea. So I can’t speak English very well (ESL). I’m wearing glasses, with black eyes, and black hair because I’m an Asian. My special things that I like are that I don’t have any decayed tooth which means I’m healthy boy and I have double eyelids. To explain my narrative specifically, I am shy. For example, sometimes I think when someone is pointing at me I feel very shy. I’m caring but I’m not sure; when I meet someone I’m helping them to do something completely. I’m knowledgeable because I know much information about some things that I know. I think I am risk taking because when I went to the camp, I did many challenges. I was scared but I did them completely but I was timid. During the camp, every morning I was little bit timid. I think I’m not responsible because I can't take care of people. When I want to express myself I play sports like tennis and football. I believe in God and I have a strong belief in him. I think God made everything and he protects me.

16 comments:

  1. Your english is better than me!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. I love you blog by you narative,because you writing is very good and the backround is good too.

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  3. I have alot in common with you! I think that's cool

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  4. great job robbie! i loved your narrative and i think it's great that you said that you get timid. A+++++!!!!!!

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  5. i love your blog and narrative, and you improved alot at your english.

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  6. I'm shy lots of times too but it's ok to be shy. I think it's good you tried new things at camp. I think facing challenges makes you a better person.

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  7. I like your background and I challenged myself at camp also.

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  8. It great that u faced many challenges at camp and were able to over come them

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  9. Robbie, I know it is not easy to be a new kid in a foreign country. You have done very well. Your English improved dramatically, and I would like to commend you for that. - Mrs. Gilboa

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